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Put yourself in the picture.

lundi 23 juin 2014

Using their senses the children tried to imagine themselves in a different climate zone.

What can you see ? What can you hear ? What can you smell ? How do you feel ?

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Abisha (CM1) imagined she was in a crowded street in Asia :

Abisha (CM1) imagined she was in a crowded street in Asia :

Oh ! It’s the sound of motorbikes ! We can see also people on bicycles. But some people are with their babies. It’s maybe Japanese people. We can smell the petrol. It’s also hot. Babies and people have masks. I’m waiting to go on a motorbike, a lot of people are behind me.

Robin (CM2) found himself in an African village :

I’m hot and I have to walk to get water and the water is green so it is not so good to drink. I feel the wind and the heat. I’m poor and I hear snakes, monkeys and tigers behind my house in the grass. I don’t have shoes and my feet are dirty and I have cuts on my feet. I’m poor and my son doesn’t go to school.

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Elliott (CM1) pictured himself in Antarctica with the eskimoes :

Elliott (CM1) pictured himself in Antarctica with the eskimoes :

My eyes hurt the snow is so white, the sun is blinding me. Look at him he survives at a temperature very cold and he makes an igloo for himself.

I eat fish and that’s all I eat for nearly all my life. I can smell nothing but fish.

My clothes are warm and soft and furry but they are heavy and bulky. I can’t move !

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